Rough cut music video

This was my original rough cut of my music video. I was given recommendations as to what I can do to improve it. I was told that I stayed on one shot for too long so I changed that and added more shots and I cut between shots more often. I therefore went out and recorded some more shots in different locations. I asked my friends to listen to the song with me and I asked them to give me some advice because I wasn't sure how many beats there were in one part of the song. This meant that I could edit to the beat with more accuracy as to how many beats there were. I adjusted the positioning of the shots as I noticed that some of the lip syncing was out of time.